Review Detail of Authorauthority in Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal

Hello, I am a big fan of your writing. I wanted to make some suggestions that may help you with your writing. First, please don't make it a harem. I noticed that all the characters in the last chapters are girls and all of them are in love with the mc. a lot of fanfic are doing this and it's getting annoying, and in my opinion the mc personality isn’t a lovable character and thena will probably kill the other love interest . Secondly, don’t include religion. What I mean by that is don't introduce prophets and stuff like that. People will get offended. I did it once and it was a disaster. Thirdly, don’t focus too much on world war one and world war two. A lot of fanfic covers that story if you want to introduce people in that period of time, sure but avoid it if possible. keep it up i really love your work and am looking forward to the next chapter.