Review Detail of Gabriel_Cabral in Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal
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I don't even know how to feel, the story was going very well, but here comes the author and makes the mistake of making the "MC" has his powers taken away by the arishem, and his powers like him were made by the OAA, never that arishem it was stronger than OAA, for me this just shows the point that at any moment you can take the power away from the "MC", so what's the point of reading this story? Writing Quality- 4 Stability of Updates- 4 Story Development- 2 Character Design- 2 World Background- 2
Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal
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really looking better there are several flaws? in character development, I've seen this in many fanfics where the character is not a "person" but just a way for the story to be told showing amazing feats, but this not what you commented makes no sense, as far as I remember he said that the Mc would be at Arishem's discretion as well as other beings, I don't know if you're connecting the fact that the Mc lost his powers meant he has no reason to read the story or the fact that the author can do in quotation marks what he wants.
