I don't know about others but I hate Mc's personality. His personality is static, for over centuries no MC character development. Yeah, you heard me, no character development. Other characters have their own development but MC is stagnant. Even learning that he was killed by One Above All and was pushed around the bush like a slave, he didn't even have a trace of contempt. Yeah, he was like just chill about it. Even if you knew that the enemy your facing is omnipotent one should have a trace of hatred even if little but MC here was so ok being killed and was chosen to do things without hating OAA (no sort of revenge and planning for over centuries just to pay back OAA). A lot of cringe sentences and dialogue between characters. He kept saying that he viewed human as monkeys which is very hypocrite since he was a human himself in his last life. Even if his body synthetic since he is Eternal, don't forget that their minds are of mortal. That's why they got that dementia type of disease, Mahd WyRy. Over all, the world background is OK, since it was related to history even if I don't know some of it. And like the update stability is so slow. If you wanted to read, just hoard it and wait like 2 months before reading it again. And on top of that, MC is a freaking monk who journey towards the path of enlightenment. Yeah, a freaking dysf*nction*l virg*n who don't want to have romance since he viewed humans a lower life form. F**k, there are a lot of famous woman figure throughout the history like Cleopatra, Helen of Troy, etc. Don't expect MC to have any form of s*xu*l life even one night stand, since according to him he can't have s*x with 'monkeys'. Don't hate this review since it is just personal. I don't like MCs character development and creation.

After my fanfic addiction started, I can't watch a movie anymore without thinking about the possible fanfic that will appear or what it would be like to have a fanfic about something from the movie.

The MC sits around and does virtually nothing for the first 800 years. Every character interaction is cringe worthy and seems so fake. Disregarding the weird uses of slang, the mc is very unlikeable for and SI character. I recommend the author rewrite, but lord knows that they won’t listen to a reviewer. MC is an eternal that is quite possibly the most boring, door-mat like b**** I have ever read. I don’t know how this story is as highly rated as it is.

I actually hesitated before reading this because of the reviews but looks like you can't trust 'reviews' with nothing but them, ranting about the story not fitting in their personal taste. Writing quality - I see no grammatical errors. Or maybe there are errors but i missed it since it's insignificant . Story development - Honestly, i really like it. I like how it's fast-paced but at the same time, slow-paced. I like the mc's adventure. From a human to an eternal with human's soul to a 'human eternal' who lost his humanity to an eternal who, in his opinion, eternals are superior than human to an eternal who gained back a bit of his humanity to an eternal who loved a child an acted as her father to a loving husband. I really like this. Characters - Above average. It's not like those top-tier novels where characters feels real but it's not like those stories where the characters are like robot reading scripts. Though, i must say, i really like mc's design. Both his outer and inner appearance. Updating stability - It's in semi-hiatus state as author said but i think it's the author is updating fine. Like it updates averaging 1 every 1-2 days. World background - Well, should we even talk about it? I mean, it's a fanfic, there's already a world behind it. Though, again i must say, exploring the history and using it is a very good idea. I also like the changes he made. Anyway, as you can see, I'm trying not to give spoilers as i don't want to ruin your experiences. Just dig in, honestly. Don't let the low reviews dictate what you will and won't read. As a reader, my advice is just risk it, dig in, and see if it suits your taste. To author, please don't ever drop this. I love thia story very much. Just watched the movie and this story satiated my thirst. Just want to say thank you very much!

Dont expect a good story for sure! It takes forever to start and the author makes mc werid and unliked for some reason. Wouldnt recommend! :(

This is just what i needed ,i watched the movie when it came out tho it was a good movie i felt that there was alot missing ,really excited about where you are going with this and i hope you wont drop it maybe and romance between oc and thena

Out of all the eternals he was the one who was pretty not close to human, , come on he was onCe A human, even if he forgets his identity he should at least Be more closer to human than the eternals cause he knows them 🙂.

I don't even know how to feel, the story was going very well, but here comes the author and makes the mistake of making the "MC" has his powers taken away by the arishem, and his powers like him were made by the OAA, never that arishem it was stronger than OAA, for me this just shows the point that at any moment you can take the power away from the "MC", so what's the point of reading this story? Writing Quality- 4 Stability of Updates- 4 Story Development- 2 Character Design- 2 World Background- 2

Writing is solid as well as character development, pretty good so far in my humble opinion. **************************************************************************