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malo: -Esta bien es un mundo de teocracia como LOM ,pero tiene el problema de que el protagonista es agnóstico lo cual mata un poco la magia del mundo en el que vive el protagonista y siempre arruina la inmercion , cosa que no ocurre en LOM en donde el protagonista respeta la cultura y religiones del mundo donde transmigro y trata de descubrir sus secretos. -El protagonista busca evangelizar su postura agnóstica en un mundo donde no hay duda de lo sobrenatural , lo cual carece de sentido , casi como que frodo reniegue de que anillo de sauron es mágico . -Se cumple demasiado la profecía auto cumplida : el protagonista llega a una deducion y eso se vuelve un hecho consumado en el mundo en el que están -La novela tiene mucho nacionalismo , Indirecto para el publico chino , el cual choca bastante al estar el personaje en otro mundo, amenos no hay racismo - xenofobia. -La forma de mostrarnos y revelarnos el mundo no tiene ni punto de comparación con LOM, es horrible y muy amateur , prácticamente te escupen en la cara el transfondo del mundo. -Los elementos de terror duran poco ya que el protagonista pierde muy rápido su miedo a lo desconocido a diferencia de LOM , donde el terror esta mejor trabajado Bueno: + Los personajes están increíblemente bien hechos , se sienten vivos y cada uno diferente , un nivel muy superior al de mayoría de novelas chinas , incluso mejor que LOM +Si lo comparamos con la media , esto SI es una buena novela o al menos intenta serlo en sus primeros 100 capítulos hasta donde leí el raw

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