Review Detail of Davros92 in Constellation Door
Review detail
The author uses Galaxia and then constellation in the synopsis. The first is a scientific set of data on the scale of billions of celestial bodies. The second is something our ancestors invented while living in caves, eating without washing their hands, and not even dominating fire. The contradiction is so absurd that the author cannot take this story very far.
Constellation Door
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You read? Write a review with a better summary. In the end, the site will put mine and your comment on the same level of relevance. I advise not to use mine as a base, apparently some people just hate my texts. Do something original and fair. Creative and structured. I believe in your ability.
Nocto:I don't like this book but your review seems like a very random and unjust reason to judge it.
If your premise is correct it only makes the situation worse for the narrative. The door is no longer a mystery for the narrative and becomes a generic justification for how him win or kill enemies. The author who claims my scenario is huge, (the galaxy) is a narrative crutch to try to justify later script holes. The galaxy is actually a breeding ground for new enemies in the narrative, The author will be able to be lazy at will. Build a good antagonist character? No way. It has a galaxy providing enemies to be shot down in a few chapters.
Flammenwurfer:You realize that it's probably due to the translation, right? The author doesn't have input on how it's converted into English. The original word/meaning in Chinese probably isn't even "constellation" but something more like "Celestial" or "Formation of the Stars"
ultimatecoom:The raw is number 1 on qidian right now so it might actually be pretty good i haven't read any of it yet tho
