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Yeetboiisverycool
YeetboiisverycoolLv22yr
2022-01-22 07:00

learn how to write before starting a story. You use too many similar words that your writing blends together. Along with not checking if what you spelled was correct or grammatically eligible. I would also work on describing scenes because I couldn't tell what was happening because it was all just talking no description of anything.

X-men: Lone wolf

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CopyPaste1
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writing quality ..lets say 80% of Chinese translation out there is better than this fic and im not talking only about grammar,even the dialogues are bad. Nice idea but sry i can not read this.

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Just the description alone warrants a good review. Stark is an underrated character. Good job author! ______________________________________

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Just the description alone warrants a good review. Stark is an underrated character. Good job author! ______________________________________

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