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Darth_Ullyses
Darth_UllysesLv53yr
2021-11-25 16:58

the translation suxxx. the story should be good if someone could iron out the wrinkles and I mean the translation, pronunciation, and sentence structure.

One Punch Man In Marvel

Renz_Udquin
3.0
69 Chs

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Daoistunderlord
DaoistunderlordLv14

It's about what you would expect from a chinese fanfic it just doesn't feel natural for the marvel world, grammar is ok and definitely needs editing but still readable.

3yr

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

it's a pain to read just like other Chinese fanfics so I'm not going to read anymore. it has a thug calling the mc little monkey and he calls Spiderman's spidy sense spider telepathy

3yr
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

Faloo....

3yr
Higgs
HiggsLv4

The translation sucks, the story sucks, even the character sucks. I mean, whats the point of having saitama as the power of the MC if he doesnt have all his power? Having "elementary version" as you call it can only be called little strength. At best its just the same as the serum strength. Then I dont get why you need to put him as saitama. The point of having saitama here is the invincibility and the intense OPness with everything one punched.

2yr
Von_Hohenheim
Von_HohenheimLv4

is the Original or Translation? .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..

3yr
spectermerlin
spectermerlinLv14

personally i like it but would work on the writing quality since it has a many errors. but yeah its good.

3yr
Blaziken19
Blaziken19Lv4

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RemoteRomance
RemoteRomanceLv4

Bad grammer, random weird chinese references and lines takes up a large part of MC’s lines, dumb mc, nonsensical dialogue. Everything you typically find in a bad chinese fic.

1yr
Rakhfi_Fairuza
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