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suyosLv102yr
2022-07-04 08:31

At first I liked it, the first chapters were very entertaining. But, the protagonist is too dense (to the extreme) and that doesn't change him at all and the worst thing when he finally confesses to the villain, she practically becomes a secondary character (he rarely appears in the story if it weren't for the fact that the MC cares about her I would say she is an extra). Also, it is too frustrating to see that the MC makes the same mistakes, for this reason I think that the MC is not dense but stupid or autistic. (Use translator)

Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant

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