Item: Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
Rating: 4
Author: Death_Penalty

Death_PenaltyLv133yr

2022-01-03 05:42

Bruh you better fix up your mcs in both of your novels or im bout to transmigrate there into that universe and fix them for you whilst only destroying the brat in the other novel as this one is okayish like seriously is your mcs okay like they only interact with those brats once and then boom they are now eternally loyal and they never ever and I'm mean never have moments where they question their loyalty which is very odd as that is what a normal person experiences when you get abused like in the other novel pls add a little more character depth to mcs with them questioning their loyalty like real peeps like I would understand if you introduced the mc like this in his previous life mcs was a boy with no name no home and nobody to look after him and either brat looked after either mcs for multiple years and took on dangerous things to protect either mc which caused him to become eternally loyal to either brat which would be reasonable unlike just seeing this brat for the first time and them becoming eternally loyal which is unrealistic from my point but other than that this novel is very good and interesting but your other is trash

Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant

Sound_Hammer

4.0

821 Chs

Liked by 8 people

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Chin_ChannLv2

LOL, then good luck on your holy crusade

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