Review Detail of NNN_CCC in Sanctuary God

The story is original, it took me a long time, and it's very nice to have added religious and mythological elements, transforming them in the service of the story. I also like the kind of black humor you have added from time to time. Just a note, if the dialogue takes place between two well-known characters, avoid describing who the sentence belongs to each time the sentence is spoken. Slow down the pace a lot. Keep it going!