good story, good concept, excellent characters, want more chapters 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

this is an amazing book you are very talented author, I like the placing of your words, the suspense you give in every chapter making a reader wants to go on and on. great novel👍

The writing quality isn't bad. But the mistake I've noticed in several places is that you use punctuation (,) at the end of many dialogues instead of (./!/?). Or you forget to put (?) when someone asks something. Another mistake(not necessarily grammar) is that you leave too often blank spaces between your phrases. It's ok to leave a blank space from time to time, for example between 2 people's dialogue or spread a description in multiple smaller pieces; but leaving a blank space between every one or two phrases of a few words is a hard no! I didn't read the whole story so I'll give 5* to Story Development. As well as for character design, in the parts that I read, I didn't see anything that told me about the characters, so I leave it 4*. The world background is almost nonexistent, In every chapter should be an amount of description which says where are the characters, how is the weather, is it cold/warm, the senses of smell/sight/hearing etc. In the last two chapters, I saw only dialogue with not enough information about where the action happens. I hope this review will be helpful!

I'm actually not fun of romance but this novel was literally busin, keep it up author and I hope your novel would get its right views........

Interesting. Keep up the good work, I like the characters. The main lead is crazy and I hope that he won't make her crazy. keep up the good work Author.

Is nice, it has a good storyline. The male is a very interesting character, so I want to see more of him, I also want to see how Ella will win his heart and save her families reputation.

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Is really interesting, I like the characters and the way the story is going. I wish you success keep up the good work and make to correct your mistakes before you publish any chapter, also give me spoilers. 🤓

I love the story it has potential, but you need to improve your writing skills. if anyone is looking for a novel to read, I will highly recommend you read this book.

So far the story seems interesting, it has a lot of plot twists and wow moments but you will need to improve your writing skills. I don't have much to say