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Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv102yr
2022-01-07 23:48

The writing was quite detailed and I love that. The world background wasn't quite there yet. And the synopsis was plain and not attractive enough and a cover is a must. I suggest adding a cover would be nice. But overall, I like the plot and the writing. The plot is simple so far, but it is interesting.[img=recommend]

Man?Monster?God?

LORDOFORIGINALINK
4.7
171 Chs

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LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKAuthor

I explained the world in the chapter question and answer and yea Im disappointed with my synopsis and I don’t know where to get a cover or who to talk to for one

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Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv10

oh sorry mate. It's really bad of me to assume that without reading that far. And I see a lot of effort in your writing. I forget to mention above that I really love your character description and the character is so well made. About the cover, you can make one for yourself by Canva.

LORDOFORIGINALINK:I explained the world in the chapter question and answer and yea Im disappointed with my synopsis and I don’t know where to get a cover or who to talk to for one
2yr
Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv10

about the world building, it will be a little bit easier for reader if you give it a little bit of this and that along the chapters.👍 Yeah, it's just my opinion.

LORDOFORIGINALINK:I explained the world in the chapter question and answer and yea Im disappointed with my synopsis and I don’t know where to get a cover or who to talk to for one
2yr
LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKAuthor

You are right my frend also told me that but the more I thought about it I relishe that what I put in those chapters was not to crazy important and there are much more sercrets that this story holds and thank for telling me about canva

2yr
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LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKAuthor

Hello I need ya help I think I created a name for the port in the early chapters but I can’ find it not can I remember so if you see it please comment on the chapter or if you get to like 30 and still don’ see it please tell me thanks

2yr

LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKAuthor

No romance I repeat no romance i just can’ delete the tag No romance I repeat no romance i just can’ delete the tag No romance I repeat no romance i just can’ delete the tag No romance I repeat no romance i just can’ delete the tag

2yr
LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKAuthor

Hello dear readers I will not be saying anything about the novel everything will unfold eventually all I will give you is that No stupid characters And no Chinese type writing with face slapping and such That’s all I will give you that rest can be seen in the novel

2yr
JI_Ah44_LEE
JI_Ah44_LEELv2

Loving the book so far.... still looking forward to read more and more of it. Guys I recommend this book it's a must read and to the writer. 👊kudos

2yr
Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv11

He did put in so much effort for this book and it's excellent how, he put so much effort into this, good work. I'm the romantic type of reader but I loved your work so much hoping to see this book go far, Keep it up. I also love how the characters are described and each action taking place .some how it feels like I'm watching it on screen lol....what a fascinating novel...[img=recommend]Need to see more chapters coming up.

2yr
LILAying_onBed
LILAying_onBedLv12

I really try my best to read this novel and it make me feel I'm reading an machine translated novel. It's not that bad, the plot is ok, the development is ok but the grammar. The punctuation marks, the capital letters. It's like you're not even try to check before you publish the chapters. PLEASE EDIT THE CHAPTERS USING GRAMMARLY. My brain hurt a bit trying to understand while reading it. I read novels to relax not to hurt my brain. By the way, keep on going author-san, I know you can improve more. Don't take my words as something that drag you down.

2yr
Oshbaby
OshbabyLv4

loving it so far keep it up and don't you dare drop it . loving it so far keep it up and don't you dare drop it . loving it so far keep it up and don't you dare drop it . loving it so far keep it up and don't you dare drop it . loving it so far keep it up and don't you dare drop it .

2yr
KayLillyt_1
KayLillyt_1Lv4

Very fascinating. Well done author. The descriptions conjure up very vivid images that take hold of the reader. Very hard to put down and very well done.

2yr
FavourEkele_1969
FavourEkele_1969Lv11

It's very thrilling, keeps you on your toes and the details are there, the grammar was very decent, keep going![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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