Review Detail of zad1333 in Altier; The Triology

Hey there, someone told me to take a look at your story and am I glad I did, as of reading chapter 4 I think it shows a lot of promise, the world building is stable and coming along nicely and the charters have easily recognizable personalities to the point that you can tell who's speaking even if the composition with *speech*---*speech*---*speech*---*speech* is a little confusing. Overall, the first 4 chapters leave me wanting to learn more about the world you are building and the characters therein. All the best - zad133