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Alchemist
AlchemistLv138mthAlchemist

I really wanted this story to be good, since I love the premise of the MC having Fou's body, unfortunately it just isn't.Most of the 'story' is just filled with status screens, item/skill descriptions and info-dumps, that are completely unnecessary for any fan of the Fate series.The actual story is filled with some of the most cringe fanfiction topes (like a comically evil Dumbledore and Weasley family), that most people are long since sick of.

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Primate Murder Through a Multiverse

Geokit

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Geokit
GeokitAuthorGeokit

How far did you read?it gets better later down the the line.this was started as a project to help my English and I was heavily influenced by a bunch of other things, I will admit that it definitely is not the best story.

Alchemist
AlchemistLv13Alchemist

I read up to chapter 20. After that I no longer had the energy to read a story I didn't enjoy.

Geokit:How far did you read?it gets better later down the the line.this was started as a project to help my English and I was heavily influenced by a bunch of other things, I will admit that it definitely is not the best story.
Geokit
GeokitAuthorGeokit

i mean entirety fair, thanks for the feedback though

Alchemist:I read up to chapter 20. After that I no longer had the energy to read a story I didn't enjoy.
Geokit
GeokitAuthorGeokit

Hey, I just wanted to tell you that I've decided to Revamp the story from the start and make it better. However that revamped version is not going to be uploaded to here on Webnovel, if you do want to check that out I posted a new chapter for the story and you can find the discord code in there to find links to the Wattpad version and in the furture the FF . net version.

Alchemist:I read up to chapter 20. After that I no longer had the energy to read a story I didn't enjoy.
Alchemist
AlchemistLv13Alchemist

I'm not really a fan of wattpad, so I'll check it out on ff.

Geokit:Hey, I just wanted to tell you that I've decided to Revamp the story from the start and make it better. However that revamped version is not going to be uploaded to here on Webnovel, if you do want to check that out I posted a new chapter for the story and you can find the discord code in there to find links to the Wattpad version and in the furture the FF . net version.
Geokit
GeokitAuthorGeokit

np.I've also uploaded it to Spacebattles

Alchemist:I'm not really a fan of wattpad, so I'll check it out on ff.