Review Detail of Deathbrick_101 in Primate Murder Through a Multiverse

This is one of the best if not the best FanFiction on Harry Potter worlds were there is a female Harry that I’ve read to this date. The update speed is quite slow but it is better than a lot of novels that I’ve read before, there is some grammatical errors here and there but not common the world background or info dump needs to be heavily reworked, since in most cases he says a brief description of said power then sends you to a wiki for more info just give a short and concise answer. And there is some numbers that need to be fixed in the old chapters getting switched around and such you could go back and edit a chapter or two most comments are people taking note of incorrections though out the book but all in all it’s in the top 3 Harry Potter books I’ve read that has less that 50 chapters can’t wait for more you have more talent for writing than I think you give yourself credit for👍