Review Detail of DJDAN in Primate Murder Through a Multiverse

It's alright. Writing quality isnt the best, but it's readable. The author writes like he's simply writing a short dairy on the events. Like "so and so said this, so and so said that, so and so said this again, so and so said that". There's not really many descriptions on things like the surroundings, so it'll be best if you have prior knowledge on the worlds used in this fanfic. Otherwise, it's good, I suggest giving it a read.