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Review Detail of TheAntiAkumar in The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)

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TheAntiAkumar
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I really wanted to like this, My problem with most novels on this website is that it almost never feels like the author is fluent in English... Making it unreadable for people with standards for grammar... This story doesn't have that problem, which is why I got to chapter 30 before leaving a review. My problem with this story is the pacing and short chapters. They're insanely short, like I think I read a chapter that was literally just the MC reading a skill he got, seeing that he got a new item, and walking back to town and speaking two sentences before the chapter ended... I MIGHT keep reading this? But the only way I'll be able to read this is by waiting until 30 chapters build up and reading them at once... And unless the 'Stability of Updates' is exceptional, that might take a while.

The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)

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TheAntiAkumar
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Like I just checked a chapter I read, 600 words...