I remembered sharing this to others but forgot to review. 🤣 So these are my thoughts. 1. This story is, like other stories I have read, containing MC which are abused or outcast from either their family or the society. So discretion for readers who may be triggered by this. 2. The grammars! I know that you worked hard on making this but since we are friends, I ought to point out your mistakes. 😏 3. Better descriptions. You should have described your characters elaborately. The way they walk or talk or what they are wearing. Overall, I look forward to how the MC will deal with the obstacles in her life since I know that she won't stay being used and abused forever. Fighting!
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