This book is definitely not the worst I've seen. It is a bit touching, and really let's you get a feel of what the author was trying to show, but the biggest issue here is the tense it is written in, as well as numerous grammatical errors. It definitely isn't bad, but needs a lot of work. Better descriptions and longer interaction between the characters would be nice as well, although I think the dialogue is very good. Work harder... Don't let anything stop you... Fighting !!! 🥰🥰🥰
MCPURPLE_7791
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LIKEWhen will I get my review? I've been waiting on you for sometime now, and honestly, I'm beginning to lose patience. Please, fulfil your own part, or I'll be forced to do something on my own end...
MCPURPLE_7791:Thank you. =) I'll keep that in mind.