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Demons_and_I
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This book is definitely not the worst I've seen. It is a bit touching, and really let's you get a feel of what the author was trying to show, but the biggest issue here is the tense it is written in, as well as numerous grammatical errors. It definitely isn't bad, but needs a lot of work. Better descriptions and longer interaction between the characters would be nice as well, although I think the dialogue is very good. Work harder... Don't let anything stop you... Fighting !!! 🥰🥰🥰

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My Meadow of Ash Trees

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MCPURPLE_7791
MCPURPLE_7791AuthorMCPURPLE_7791

Thank you. =) I'll keep that in mind.

Demons_and_I
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Can I get my review now? 🙃

MCPURPLE_7791:Thank you. =) I'll keep that in mind.
Demons_and_I
Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

When will I get my review? I've been waiting on you for sometime now, and honestly, I'm beginning to lose patience. Please, fulfil your own part, or I'll be forced to do something on my own end...

MCPURPLE_7791:Thank you. =) I'll keep that in mind.
MCPURPLE_7791
MCPURPLE_7791AuthorMCPURPLE_7791

I'm still reading yours so please give me sometime ☺️

Demons_and_I
Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

Okay bro. I'll wait. Take your time. Thank you so very much 🥰

MCPURPLE_7791:I'm still reading yours so please give me sometime ☺️