Review Detail of Blaz3r in A Narcissist's Rebirth

14 chapters in and i liked it so far everything is good except the characters personalities like sometime they are mad and all it takes is one sentence and they are suddenly okay with the MC and another character where she was seductive and suddenly shy (when she was shy when he saw her panty and then she gave it to him?) i hope you can work on it but otherwise everything is good.