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Stand_TheWorld777
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Honestly, this story made me feel interesting with the addition of mc's background while in his new world at this time. My advice can be remembered or forgotten, it's up to you: 1. Do not rush in making a story. 2. Character development of mc and his harem is very important so as not to become like pokemon (you know this.) 3. Stability update in story. 4. Set goals from the beginning to the end of your novel because if you think about it in the middle usually the author will get caught up in imagination. Sorry if my language is confusing because I use google translate.

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A Narcissist's Rebirth

J_Titan

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NJSG
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salam dari binjay wkek

J_Titan
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To be honest it was the most sincerest review i have read so far. And what you mentioned is already in my mind but problem occurs when setting up goals. I am still thinking where I should take the story or how many anime i should include. Well a turning imagination into writing is whole new deal so i will try what i can do.

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Salam dari binjay:v

Stand_TheWorld777
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Well, I just wish you success in your book.

J_Titan:To be honest it was the most sincerest review i have read so far. And what you mentioned is already in my mind but problem occurs when setting up goals. I am still thinking where I should take the story or how many anime i should include. Well a turning imagination into writing is whole new deal so i will try what i can do.
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salam binjay

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Anjay binjay :v

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Njir binjay

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Salam Dari Binjai

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Binjai too

A_K_I_N_G83884929:Salam dari binjay:v
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Salam dari Binjay

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Buset rame amat