This is a review based off the first 4 chapters. It seems like the MC is going be way overpowered for no other reason than he was first to the black hole? I would consider slowing down the information dumps, there was just skills and stats everywhere but no time to digest it. Maybe use a chapter to explain each unit what it can do etc. It will be interesting to see how the story develops
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