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This is a review based off the first 4 chapters. It seems like the MC is going be way overpowered for no other reason than he was first to the black hole? I would consider slowing down the information dumps, there was just skills and stats everywhere but no time to digest it. Maybe use a chapter to explain each unit what it can do etc. It will be interesting to see how the story develops

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The Story Of The War Citadel

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Ilovecultivation
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My plan is to make him overpowered, And I will make auxiliary chaps to show sheets and stuff. Thanks for the review though

Ilovecultivation
IlovecultivationAuthorIlovecultivation

Quick question if you don't mind. Would you want a love interest or not?