Review Detail of the_goat_4880 in Saints, Legends and Love

I mean there's not much to say about this one, it's a pretty good (cultivation or magic, your power levels sound magic but I don't know lol?) set in kingdom fantasy novel . All generic but it's good. Author is generally good in writing but punctuation is not good, there are some errors and parts where it is awkward and does not flow well. Can definitely be improved. Characters are very shallow thus far, consider developing them because even now 6 chapters in they feel 2D despite you spending so much screentime on them and giving so much world description. The constant POV changes in first person are very awkward and ruins immersion, it can be executed better, may just be me but I found using first person strictly for one character and third person for the rest to be much better and more immersive from a readers perspective.