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2024-05-08 04:02

Spelling and grammar not the best. But the worst part of this book is the mc. she is such a pushover. Elena hates mc and wants to kill her so in return the mc: Enhances jeremy’s strength, revived jeremy when elena asks, gave elena a pill that makes her immune to most poisons (including werewolf bite), let her have an artifact that gives her the ability to not need an invitation to someone’s house, the artifact cannot be taken off by someone else, the artifact lets her walk in the sun and the artifact can also summon the mc and force her to help elena. Only good point is that the chaps are quite long but apart from that it seems like this was made with no real structure in mind. For some strange reason the author made elena a horrible person in this book and still makes the mc help her.

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