Review Detail of ErbluhenZero in The Last Monarch's Wishes

Warm welcomes to all the readers who came to visit. This is my first novel, a dip into the 'Survival Game' trope for a writing contest. Do note that this story is not strictly related to this theme, and could branch out to other tropes depending on how I continue this story later on. Also, here are some general points regarding my work that I think you should consider. 1. English is not my first language, nor do I have an editor to help correct my mistakes. I'm still a young student, so I don't have much time to proofread my work, and this can lead to minor mistakes here and there. I still try to keep my grammar afloat so that you won't get a headache while reading. 2. As I've mentioned before, this is my first novel, so plot holes could even form. I will be grateful if you can point it out to me in a constructive manner if that does happen in the future through comments. 3. Harem is not my thing. It's just not. I know harems are absurdly popular here, but I just can't.. Some romance could form in the future, but if you came looking for harems, I suggest you back off and throw this novel out of your library right away. 4. This story might be slow-paced in the beginning, but I can tell you that I'm a big fan of action. There will be action. There must be action in this child's life, or even I will get bored writing his story. 5. This book's name is [The Last Monarch's Wishes]. This title might be out-of-place in the beginning, as the topic won't be discussed at all before the gears of fate start to grind. Where is the Last Monarch, you say? I don't know, go look in the story, that guy is bound to appear one day. All in all, if you decide to read, it'd be very much appreciated if you could leave comments, reviews, donate some power stones, and add this book into your library to support me! Kind reminder: This is a high fantasy novel, so please don't try to apply our world's normal logic as it might not always check out all the time. The author sucks at physics, so no matter how much you rage in the comments pointing out the stupid mistakes I might make, I'll probably keep breaking tons of laws. Thank you for reading, ErbluhenZero (Luche) :D