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Civilization system

Lakshmi_Sandeep

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Lakshmi_Sandeep
Lakshmi_SandeepAuthorLakshmi_Sandeep

Thanks bro but....Actually i know the story is not able to give 5/5 but i am trying a lot to improve my story.

Vivan_Create:Your story is very good, never listen to the haters
Lakshmi_Sandeep
Lakshmi_SandeepAuthorLakshmi_Sandeep

Ya, i know the novel is not that good, thanks for being open

Soel_Eater
Soel_EaterLv4Soel_Eater

Keep the story emproving so that we can enjoy your work

Lakshmi_Sandeep
Lakshmi_SandeepAuthorLakshmi_Sandeep

Yes sure. I am happy that someone is enjoying my work...

Soel_Eater:Keep the story emproving so that we can enjoy your work
Vivan_Create
Vivan_CreateLv1Vivan_Create

Your story is very good, never listen to the haters

funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv13funmaxwell

your synapse is almost unreadable. I don't even want to try to read the story if the synapse is this bad.

Lakshmi_Sandeep:Ya, i know the novel is not that good, thanks for being open
Lakshmi_Sandeep
Lakshmi_SandeepAuthorLakshmi_Sandeep

Yes, i know it. I'm working on my English grammer i will soon learn it

funmaxwell:your synapse is almost unreadable. I don't even want to try to read the story if the synapse is this bad.
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FPJK
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Synopsis is what I think you meant to say. This is because synapse is the site of transmission of electric nerve impulses between two nerve cells or between a neuron and a gland or muscle cell.

funmaxwell:your synapse is almost unreadable. I don't even want to try to read the story if the synapse is this bad.
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funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv13funmaxwell

yes it's a grammar error. But I don't understand why your trying to correct it? As it's just comment I typed out in a few seconds and didn't think about it afterwards and grammar error was created by speak function mistaking synopsis for synapse.

FPJK:Synopsis is what I think you meant to say. This is because synapse is the site of transmission of electric nerve impulses between two nerve cells or between a neuron and a gland or muscle cell.
FPJK
FPJKLv3FPJK

Idk either man

funmaxwell:yes it's a grammar error. But I don't understand why your trying to correct it? As it's just comment I typed out in a few seconds and didn't think about it afterwards and grammar error was created by speak function mistaking synopsis for synapse.
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