Review Detail of finalgetsuga in Naruto: My Transmigration

Item: Naruto: My Transmigration
Rating: 2.2

Review detail

finalgetsugaLv12yrfinalgetsuga

well i read it and im dissapointed everything bout this is trash...................................................................................

Naruto: My Transmigration

MasterOfDeath7777

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MasterOfDeath7777AuthorMasterOfDeath7777

Hahahhaha lol, bro go easy in me. This fanfic is the first story i written, so of course it's not perfect. But I'm going to post soon a ver 2 of it, maybe it's up to your liking. So yeah, thanks👍➡😂

2yr

DaooflazinessLv2Daooflaziness

I agree though it's mainly because of the grammar mistakes that make it harder to really read.

2yr

finalgetsugaLv1finalgetsuga

thanks for taking the criticism i hope you get better bro

MasterOfDeath7777:Hahahhaha lol, bro go easy in me. This fanfic is the first story i written, so of course it's not perfect. But I'm going to post soon a ver 2 of it, maybe it's up to your liking. So yeah, thanks👍➡😂

2yr

MasterOfDeath7777AuthorMasterOfDeath7777

Dude i know... Many people always say that. Its really hard for me...English is not my first language, its my third so when im writing i keep doing google translate and it's a drag... But at least i tried right?😂

Daooflaziness:I agree though it's mainly because of the grammar mistakes that make it harder to really read.

2yr

MasterOfDeath7777AuthorMasterOfDeath7777

Thanks bro... I appreciate it lol.. But dude, you broke me...😂

finalgetsuga:thanks for taking the criticism i hope you get better bro

2yr

MasterOfDeath7777AuthorMasterOfDeath7777

Hahahahha.... Bro i rewrote it. But it only have 1 chapter today. But check it if it improve...

2yr