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Birjinia_Lamour
Birjinia_LamourLv12yr
2022-10-15 10:36

Esta bien y todo pero necesita más desarrollo del mc todo este tiempo solo se le muestra ayudando , consiguiendo mujeres y no se le muestra desarrollando su poder o haciendo más fuerte n que parezca muchas otras personas sean más fuertes que el se contenga , entiendo que no tenga sentimientos pero cuando los tendrá de vuelta y sentirá de verdad , cuando tendrá hijos o será el ser más poderoso del mundo , universo , multiverso , entre otros

Marvel/DC: Morningstar of Sin

SirSyko
4.6
83 Chs

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TheUncultured
TheUnculturedLv3

Can't say I want to be helpful and write a proper review, so ima just say 'YES' and leave It at that

2yr

HtetWaiAung
HtetWaiAungLv4

All I can say is good. ......................................................................................................................

2yr
Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1

well.... overall pretty good although in some parts it's boring for me. and also I don't really like Marvel x DC. I mean, a fusion of Marvel and DC. If it's the multiverse I'd still like to read.

2yr
Im19
Im19Lv1

Im giving you these 5 star review for being one of the many most great and awesome writer simply because there is NO HAREM🥰 also its quite interesting to me cause not only is he in Marvel but also Dc also how amazing would it be if Maleficent/darkfey is in Marvel or Dc its awesome dont you think?😁(With no harem of course just so you can think more of the story more than of the of girls😉 definitely not because im tired of these 💩 and definitely because nobody wants to read pokemon gonna catch them all except those los cough...cough.. you know what I mean😉)

2yr
MrSleepyAsh98ij3g
MrSleepyAsh98ij3gLv2

I like this fanfic...but please can you tell.me which part is rewritten..i can't find any difference..If this is the same can you give me a link for the one which was rewritten

2yr
Kal_Thanatos
Kal_ThanatosLv3

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2yr
ANANTA
ANANTALv4

To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.

2yr
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

is this a harem??? .

2yr
Emu_Lator
Emu_LatorLv1

I like the flow of the story. Im a sucker for OP MC's. But not too sure about merging mavel and dc worlds. Thats too complicated of a merge with all the higher beings and world structure. But honestly disappointed that this hasnt been updated for more than a year

6mth
crepskul
crepskulLv4

It was pretty good I really liked it...............

9mth
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