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bunnyrabbit
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2022-01-23 14:47

The author did a good job on this one! My first honest impression was, "The synopsis was so long!!" Though I'm not really bothered by it. Anyway, it has a great start, you can feel that she's indeed hurting from all the injuries and not some protagonist who seemed like they've swallowed a whole gallon of anesthesia who can still move just fine despite all the blood loss. I'd like to see how the protagonist's character development would go in the future.😁😁

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Atlantys
AtlantysAuthor

I shortened the synopsis because I also started to think it was too long... thanks 4 the review!

bunnyrabbit
bunnyrabbitLv2

That's great! Good luck with your endeavor! I will check your story from time to time whenever I feel like it. Also, if it's not too much to ask, you might want to check my story as well entitled "The JOKER". Only if you like it, that is. Shameless, ain't I?

Atlantys:I shortened the synopsis because I also started to think it was too long... thanks 4 the review!
Atlantys
AtlantysAuthor

Hehehe... aren't we all?

bunnyrabbit:That's great! Good luck with your endeavor! I will check your story from time to time whenever I feel like it. Also, if it's not too much to ask, you might want to check my story as well entitled "The JOKER". Only if you like it, that is. Shameless, ain't I?
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