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Item: My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead
Rating: 5

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name1681Lv142yrname1681

Danmachi fanfic. The story itself seems good and their is no major grammar or spelling mistakes so far or at least i haven't noticed any. SPOILERS BELLOW SPOILERS BELLOW SPOILERS BELLOW SPOILERS BELLOW SPOILERS BELLOW SPOILERS BELLOW SPOILERS BELLOW SPOILERS BELLOW SPOILERS BELLOW Story starts with the Protagonist joining hestia and bell is already their but has not been covered in blood by ais yet. The protag has got 1 magic and 1 skill at the start which are good and he does not seem interested in any of the Loki family romantically.

My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead

Azazyel

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name1681Lv14name1681

I put this here because their are no reviews and the synopsis doesn't tell us anything. I have only put the basics here but do give it a try.

2yr

LaurentCrossLv13LaurentCross

trash hestia simp

2yr

ErelVLv3ErelV

Jasjajaja no harem?

2yr

origin_sethLv4origin_seth

heh, talk about simp.. why dont you say that you not simp with your wife ? in front of her face. you said that and you will get a divorce paper. dude, Be real..

LaurentCross:trash hestia simp

2yr

TheRealJesusChwistLv3TheRealJesusChwist

tags do say harem, so... idk

ErelV:Jasjajaja no harem?

2yr

etkowatchesLv15etkowatches

you clearly don't understand grammar concepts

2yr

Joshua_Brillas_7872Lv3Joshua_Brillas_7872

I like the story

2yr

machadogbcLv15machadogbc

The story seems nice but I hate Lili so I’m out, sorry.

2yr

IsekaiLordLv4IsekaiLord

simp means a man simping for someone that does not love him back. Why don't you go up to your teacher who you have a crush on and manipulate her so you can live with her. .simp

origin_seth:heh, talk about simp.. why dont you say that you not simp with your wife ? in front of her face. you said that and you will get a divorce paper. dude, Be real..

2yr

CouchPotatoDandyLv5CouchPotatoDandy

Thanks for writing which fanfic this is about. I can't stand those authors who doesn't mention which world their MC is reincarnates in... Anyway, thanks!

1yr

ArdentAngelLv13ArdentAngel

Seeing there are supposed no major grammar mistakes, I gave this novel a go. Thanks for misleading the audience with your non-understanding of proper English review with unreal facts. Next time, please don't state facts you aren't sure about. So let me put this out there first: sentences have no head or tail, they are mushed together to barely make sense of what author is trying to convene. Paragraphs are also randomly split, but this doesn't really bother me all that much. And vocabulary, there are lots of mistakes as well. No, English isn't my primary language either, but I can't enjoy such broken English either. I have no idea if grammar improved later down the line, since I couldn't stand reading past the first couple chapters. Otherwise, thanks for the review, it did gave hope and a hint at what to expect from the story. Unfortunately, bad grammar did turn me away at the end, as happens with too many novels on this site.

1yr

Adam_ClintonLv13Adam_Clinton

Thanks for doing god's work OP. It's very frustrating reading fanfiction on webnovel where they don't even say what it's a fanfiction of. Like, I have to look through reviews or skim chapter titles looking for familiar names.

1yr