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I don't like the fact that after showing so much interaction with his mother, Irene died and he, killed her himself and it came suddenly too, like give it a dark or tragic tag or at least write something in the synopsis I just read some days ago in research that what you read, listen to etc affects your worldview perspective so trying to be positive I don't like this is kind of surprises and I just don't like Irene died and mostly how she died

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Okay i see your point. but i made them interact like that because i wanted the readers to feel somewhat upset at her death. The mc will greif for a bit but after that he wont go through something like this again. Also please remember while iv Read a lot of ff i am an Rookie writer but thank for your input