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Raine_Lucian_8818Lv23yr
2021-11-28 17:01

A nice book.....though some visible mistakes which I guess do not affect the book that much! About your characters, well.... You should also focus on the others, not just your MC.

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Ruby_banks02
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thanks for the review, but as you can see I am still in the beginning of the book.....you don't expect me to jump to other characters. everything is stage by stage.

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