Review Detail of TehStorm in xXDroppedXx

I liked his quirk and the story, it's something new and i have never seen it before. The problem with the story is that everything is happening way too fast and without build up. For example, Izuku entered a normal Dojo to learn how to fight and suddenly he was already beating multiple people by himself only 3 months later... I think you should re writte some of the first chapters and change his backstory a bit, for example, you could say he started learning hacking and engineering when he was young to become a hero, because all that hacking and building up his equipment came out of nowhere. That would explain how he is so good at hacking and how he was able to build his gear. Not to mention you could also say he had a strong body already, or at least a fit body, because sorry to say but 3 months is no where near enough to build up a hero body, specially since he is runaway and is living with the salary of a waiter.. Besides that you need to develop his family a bit more. The whole reason for the neglect was really weird, it actually reminds me of those cliche Naruto and Harry Potter neglect fanfictions where the neglect makes ZERO sense and they did it just because...Maybe having all for one have a hand in it? Anways, i look foward to see more and how you will improve from here on out.