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Writing quality: if we're talking grammar then it's fine. Stability of updates: picked this up like 1 hour ago so i wouldn't know. Story development: went to like chapter 11 so also wouldn't know. Character design and World Background: Not only is this guy the best assasin in the world, apparantly he is able to create human like AI and memorise it's entire code which apparantly took him hours to write (after memorization mind you). Did this guy also cure cancer while having sex with every mother in his city? He, a full-time assasin, is able to create a code so complex that it simulates the human mind, which will take hundreds of thousands, if not millions of lines of code, make it reach human level responsiveness and apparantly before any other organization on earth has. Even without faktoring in the impossibility of him arriving at this code before anyone else, even the mere computing power of such a program would require understanding of quantum physics decades or even centuries beyond the collective knowledge of the entire humankind on the topic. I hate to be a party pooper but god damn does this plot point annoy me. You don't have to write your character as the second coming of christ.

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Endzone: Simulated Apocalypse

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