Review Detail of hendra_gunawan_8460 in Cheatless reincarnation in the world of Dxd

Will Rias be in the hárèm ?

amm.. How about , no? You're not an Author, you're a schoolboy who can't even write. What's the funniest thing that seemed "unique" to you was the idea of starting the presentation of your hero with a "slash dog" on which all the dxd fans in the don't care..

This is at most a 2 star not gonna cap

I didn't want to say that it right or wrong but for me I don't like mc telling others his all secret. I think you must want to make it your way but most fans fic readers read it like they live the story themselves atlest I do that. So thinking about giving your secret make them think that it's not good. Everything is good keep working and when you write something new I hope it will be interesting