Review Detail of Amitabha_Vardha in My Zombie Levelling Up System

Item: My Zombie Levelling Up System
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Amitabha_VardhaLv111yrAmitabha_Vardha

So, I read your, book and it was honestly interesting. Like the part where… I honestly don’t care enough to read past the, the first part. Like bro… what is this? It’s boring af. Like I want the best for you but you should probably give up. This clearly isn’t for you but maybe it’s just me. Honestly tho try harder or give up.

My Zombie Levelling Up System

Codonaine

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CodonaineAuthorCodonaine

I’m not going to quit writing over someones opinion.

1yr

Amitabha_VardhaLv11Amitabha_Vardha

Good! Then get better at it. Like the heck? At least try.

1yr

CodonaineAuthorCodonaine

Who are you to encourage someone to quit a passion they have been doing for half of their life. You seem to be the only one disliking it, I am not going to listen to you.

Amitabha_Vardha:Good! Then get better at it. Like the heck? At least try.

1yr

CodonaineAuthorCodonaine

Oh no my writing and storytelling is different from others; what can I do?! 👹🙌

Amitabha_Vardha:Good! Then get better at it. Like the heck? At least try.

1yr

Amitabha_VardhaLv11Amitabha_Vardha

Oh no, honestly the story is fine, I’d even enjoy it. It’a just your telling of the story makes it suffer so much that it hurts me to see it. It’s like. Why did this story have to be written by you?

1yr

Amitabha_VardhaLv11Amitabha_Vardha

Try to be more invested in it. Read a few traditionally published books. See what they do that you don’t. Correct your mistakes and give the story the chance it deserves. Or at least hire an editor.

1yr