Review Detail of BookWorms007 in Revelations @end of the world

It is a good novel. However certain flaws keep preventing this novel from achieving its true potential............1) The story is too complex. Make it more simpler. The power system is far too complex for understanding. Add a prologue or something to make it easier.2) Split personality itself is a bad omen. It would have been better if MC assimilates the knowledge of the other personality. ( or you could have an artifact where the other personality/ person resides)3)Appearance of alien and what not should not have happened so early in the novel. It is making this novel far too ardous to read. 4) Give more depth to the characters and conversations. Or else it gives a bland feel to the novel.5)A lot of events are taking place in a very short duration of time. Thus, Each events fail to get due attention from readers. It seems as if author is trying to add a lot of events( competition, travelling to another world, new characters, new species , new powers) all within few chapters.