it would have been more interesting if the MC started his own pirate crew instead of following luffy. By following luffy the overall plot of the story remains the same with all the same islands.

Great start. Funny and entertaining so 5 stars from me. Keep up the good work and maybe add a few chapterd to understand the Mc better before you go on to write about the straw hat adventure.

This story has a massive amount of potential. MC: Isn't edgy nor a know-it-all while adds in his own flare into the group without sounding forced. Still nothing much to go off on since so far, we know little about our Protagonist. Power: Mc is slowly developing his foundation while not being a liability to the group and not immediately their MAIN powerhouse but shows potential to be one of them especially with the devil fruit that they get. Love interest: It isn't a harem which is a plus for me since their aren't enough of OTP fic that are well written. (Or at least the Arthor hasn't made out to be one yet) Storyline changes: It's still early into the series and there isn't really much that has been changed due to the MC appearance or involvement besides dialogue. I still hope to see some subtle changes that causes major waves later on. But overall, a great story to spent your time on.

despite being a fanfic, it's not for me, the author did something very common in one piece fanfics, he made the mc join the straw chapel pirates crew, although he prefers that the mc doesn't limit himself following them, I like it when fanfic explores the world and is not limited to canon. Another thing I didn't like was the mc not killing the enemies, I know that having people who will defend that they don't need to do that or as he's with Luffy they won't do that, but it's simply irrational that in a world of the era of Piracy you have mercy on your enemy, in addition to the irrational situations as the people of the island forgave the Arlong pirates after years of abuse.

great book so far. very funny start. keep up the great work.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

Continue a escrever a historia.........magnífico a historua embora esteja no começo eu já estou gostando espero não ter harém, no máximo 2 esposas ( Nami e Hancock)

I like the story and cant wait for more. Filllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Please don't follow original one piece arc. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

interesting