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i have no words really the mc was like 3-5 and acting like an adult telling his parents what to do etc you should have skipped childhood years imo

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The World's Greatest Villain

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Thank you for the criticism I really needed that as this is just my First Novel I hope you still enjoy the Story even if it has some flaws