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Reviewed at chapter 32: A very well written and amazing work with very few mistakes, but overall almost nonexistent due to it not hindering my reading experience and I was never bothered by it. Quality wise close to top tier in terms of spelling and grammar with only few chapters containing the said mistakes, but based on AN only due to it being unedited yet. A little bit unstable updating stability as well, but pretty understandable knowing that author is currently in Uni. Great job I'd say to author knowing his priorities and choosing his studies before this. Though I do want more chapters and I was a bit famished due to the story having few chapters published yet. I do understand however that the story is still relatively new as of this writing. Story wise really love it. Great take on cultivation type story. I breath of fresh air due to the saturated and too many novels being published now a days having Wish starting concept or System based ones. Right pacing and what I really like is at least so far the lack of headache inducing and annoying common tropes present in most cultivation novels these days. Very entertaining story with a huge plus for the fight scenes. Well described and exciting, but not too long and not too short as well. Character wise, really like the MC so far. He's still beginning his journey and stumbling on his way, but he learns fast and is humane so I really like that. 30 plus chapters in and I've already seen a significant amount of character growth from MC which is very commendable for that. Few characters was shown so far that matters so can't really state an opinion on it yet due to lack of source to criticised or commend. Though I would do state how I don't like the only romantic prospect shown so far. Mainly due to how she was introduced and how she acted around with MC. On the other hand, World Background of the story is fantastic at least based on the prologue(first chapter) and the glimpses of the big and vast universe shown so far shown and inserted bit by bit in the story. Gives the feeling of excitement and something to look forward to in the story. Homeworld wise however, not that much to comment due to the MC still being one of the most basic frog among the myriad of frogs inside a well. Too early too judge and comment on the Cultivation system so far, but surely it isn't bad. Only thing that is both good and bad would be the depiction of the monster race. I love how the story really shows and is giving focus on how they aren't just mindless beasts to kill and hunt. But I think the amount of intelligence and sentience so far shown is alarming and kind of aburd due to it being too early to introduced especially how were still in starting stage and with them being weak. Would have been better I think if the same concept was implemented midway through the story not during the early stage. Anyway, overall really like and love the story. Absolutely entertaining and great read. Worth the time and I'm really glad to have found it and read it. Thank you to author for bringing to life this amazing work of yours. P.S. Shoutout to author of 'Morningstar of Sin' I discovered this amazing story through his recommendation due to author helping him out on rewriting his story if I remember it correctly.

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Thank you so much for the review. I will post more chapters, but the holidays have me busy with family since it's the only time I spend with them because I am in med school, and it gets very hectic there! Thank you for giving my story a chance; I appreciate all the comments; I will soon reply to them like I always do.

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Looking forward for the upcoming chapters. Nuh, no worries you're doing it right. Christmas holidays is really a one of the best times to reunite with and spend time with our family. Happy holidays. Hope you mass release in Jan 1 for a great New Year start for us readers. Hahaha. Just kidding but would really love it if really did it. 😂

Black_Lotus99:Thank you so much for the review. I will post more chapters, but the holidays have me busy with family since it's the only time I spend with them because I am in med school, and it gets very hectic there! Thank you for giving my story a chance; I appreciate all the comments; I will soon reply to them like I always do.