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2021-12-02 12:28

A good fanfic with great potential, my fear is that as the protagonist is getting too strong while he's very young, it might tire the author in the future to create plots where the protagonist is not extremely strong, or need to create forced situations to match. the strength of the MC.

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Attention spoil !! . . . . This commentary is written for people who stop right after reading the first chapter and the list of cheaters and yelling that this is unacceptable and that one of the abilities would be enough. I am writing this review to explain why from my point of view, although the number of cheats is numerous, their power consumption is still acceptable. So let's come back to the number of cheaters: (1) -> the potential X5 (2) -> purified blood line (Uzumaki) (3) -> Haki armament (4) -> Quirk: creation I would like to remind you that we are sticking to an MC which in the original version only has the kama and its own chakra and the Jogan in the official version. where Naruto has a monstrous chakra coupled with the help of Kurama / Hagoromo / Reincarnation of Ashura I think the author wanted to give through cheaters (1) and (2) the means to strengthen the MC and allow him to face the danger he will have to face without giving him the strength of naruto from chapter 1. the potential of the X5 is acceptable and allows him to quickly learn a lot of jutsu. I think given how fast the MC progresses, he will have a Jonin or Kage level when he has to face the first attack and be able to perform actions from the first fight and not just show presence as was the case in the anime. concerning the purified Uzumaki line. it offers 4 abilities (healing / large amount of chakra / Third Eye of Kagura / sealing chain). the MC figured out how to increase his chakra amount on his own in his youth, so I don't think this skill offers a particular cheat. regarding the capabilities of sensor ninja, I will response that to be able to effectively strike the Otsutsuki with ninjutsu, learning senjutsu is necessary and the senjutsu offers the ninja sensor ability. The chains and blood heal are minor aids, it remains acceptable. concerning the Busoshoku no Haki this one offers 3 abilities, physical reinforcement, weapon reinforcement and emission (RYUO) For the physical strengthening part and reinforcement of weapons, the MC was able to obtain the same result by injecting doton chakra into his body or into his weapon to be reinforced. concerning the RYUO, the technique resembles the combat technique of combat of the hyuga clan (Jûken) as well as the taijutus of the toads. Much like the Juken which works by injecting chakra into the opponent's body, the RYUO technique concentrates its power in the emission of haki into the opponent's body. Whell, the "Quirk: Creation" is not a combat oriented quirk but rather a support type quirk, its power lies in its versatility, non-combat use is much more suited to harness the full potential of this ability. this is why i think that although the number of cheats remains numerous, in the world of naruto these cheats are acceptable.

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