Review Detail of Dust_In_R in Guy in Harry Potter with Quirk Overhaul (Dropped)

Item: Guy in Harry Potter with Quirk Overhaul (Dropped)
Rating: 1.6

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Dust_In_RLv41yrDust_In_R

I think the story has a lot of potential. But it is currently written like you are translating it from another language. A very bad translation at that. But like I said the story has some good ideas and could go far if it was written correctly and wasn't so painful to read.

Guy in Harry Potter with Quirk Overhaul (Dropped)

Sky_Lion

Liked it!

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Sky_LionAuthorSky_Lion

Yes, I'm using google translator. I will try to make the story interesting but this is my first time writing so there will be a lot of holes in the story.

1yr

Dust_In_RLv4Dust_In_R

Honestly you are doing pretty good for your first story. I have tried writing stories for some of the ideas I have but I suck at writing and always give up. Since you are using a translator I would recommend finding a better one than Google translate or have someone that is fluent in English read the chapter before you post it to make sure it makes sense.

Sky_Lion:Yes, I'm using google translator. I will try to make the story interesting but this is my first time writing so there will be a lot of holes in the story.

1yr