Review Detail of shacochan in King Of Limbo

I’ve noticed a trend on webnovel where authors always seem to rush everything and forget character development, they flood so much unnecessary action and have fights against lackluster beings that last many chapters but hold no purpose to the story. I already said before starting this story isn’t for those who lack patience and just want to see a quick power trip that quickly turns old and turns into filler. The story doesn’t have a singular goal, in each volume the mc’s focus is always different. If you prefer a story where an mc has a set goal like revenge or gaining immortality then proceeds to use 1000 chapters doing that then this isn’t it. Chaos is a writers best friend? If that’s what you’re only looking for then the fanfic section will be heaven for you. As reader as well I know for a fact that stories that begin with chaos and hype don’t survive long. If you’re so confident in them then name a few that have reached a 1000 chapters, I know far more that have been dropped due to the author saturating his story and readers eventually getting bored and migrating to another story. Either way I appreciate you taking time to leave a review and read the work, 👌🏽

Wasn't expecting a conversation. I'll be more upcoming with the review. You claim the story goes slow. I don't believe that is the case. Pacing aside, you are focusing on the wrong things to describe. Perhaps you have improved over the months. I only have 18 chapters to work with. After the read, I am left utterly oblivious to the Mc's thoughts. How could I begin to speculate when you gave me nothing to work with? What food does he like, what ticks him off, what does he love, does he have a sense of humor and much more. 'Bob ignored the loud questioning with a nonchalant expression.' is breadcrumbs compared to a sentence like 'Bob glued his eyes to the flickering candle light. The barrage of questions was too much to take in at once. He needed time to sort his thoughts so he relaxed his face and tried his best not to flinch. Predators lunged on prey when they flinched, he hoped to give them pause with this universal law.'. This is an example of what you should aspire to call slow. As for chaos, well, idk what meaning you labeled it. What I mean by chaos simply put is not peaceful. It can be as simple as mosquitoes bugging the Mc every afternoon or some minor family disputes to something exaggerated that I'm sure I don't need to describe. I'm willing to read just to know how the mosquitoes are resolved. I am not looking forward to reading nothing. As I said, chaos is a writers friend.

(assuming you still stuck in chapter 18) i will have to disagree with u that the story is ''fast paced'' since u have only read 18 chapters his goals are ''vague'' since thats what it looks like to other characters as well but as the story progresses we get to delve deep into his mind and how he thinks and what his goals are and how he interacts with other characters and environments, its quite satisfying

Are there side character chapters, aka filler chapters? That's one of my K.O. signs for any novel. Because instead of focusing on the "important" part of a narrative, some authors are jumping in between different POVs just for the fun of it. But if you skip those chapters, you missed nothing at all. That are fillers for me

from what i read and i real all the available chapters no there is not filler each chapter adds to the goal of the mc no matter how trivial it may seem his just increasing his chances of his plan and goal of succeeding