webnovel
Gabriel_Menard
Gabriel_MenardLv13yr
2021-11-28 06:42

Une très bonne histoire. J'avais peur que son cheat soit trop puissant mais l'équilibre des puissances est bien établi. De plus les relations entre les membres sont plutôt bien réalisées (même si ce n'est que le début de la fanfiction). Je trouve très intéressant que le MC possède la magie des totems, et non pas une magie cheat comme la magie de la barrière; magie de l'espace; magie du temps; magie du haki ... J'aime beaucoup le fait que le MC créer des stratégies, ne se repose pas que sur les totems mais aussi sur la lance et sur son corps... Beaucoup de potentiel et un très bon début. Continuer comme ça

Fairy tail: Magic General

Xenodia
3.8
109 Chs

Liked it!

LIKE
Replies1
Porya_Nasiri
Porya_NasiriLv4

seriously do you expect people to understand what you wrote?🤣

3yr
Other Reviews
WoahBuddy
WoahBuddyLv1

I read through chapter three. It's not great, and I don't believe I will miss anything from further reading. I can't say anything positive about the novel. What I dislike most are the characters and dialogue. Their unlikeable, unoriginal, and have no personalities. The conversations felt too stiff and impassive. From the comments, I believe the author mentioned that this was their first written novel. It's completely understandable, but it feels like a Chinese MTL, even though they said it wasn't. Besides the problems with writing and world knowledge, I'll give this a 1.8/5.

1yr

Weikin_fall_8766
Weikin_fall_8766Lv4

for his larger soldiers use the ruin graders, ruin guard, ruin serpent, aeonblight drakes and the other series from genshin impact[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

I'm only reading to see how bad can this be. Zero emotions cardboard cutouts or robots instead of characters and author did zero research.

2yr
Xenodia
XenodiaAuthor

Following my senpais in this industry I shall shamelessly rate myself five stars!!! anyways go read the story i tell ya it's gon be a good fanfic.

3yr
calciness
calcinessLv11

L'histoire est plutôt bonne, le personnage est intéressant il a bien était intégré au monde fairy tail son pouvoir est bien équilibrer pas trop OP mais à beaucoup de potentiel le seul hic n'arrive pas à savoir l'âge du MC par rapport au reste du personnage du cannon

3yr
AuroraFlower30303
AuroraFlower30303Lv4

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
Slothful_Player
Slothful_PlayerLv4

The mc has no personality or interesting traits and doesn't have a goal, so his actions don't have any weight, and the character interactions feel like they were written by an AI with how bland and rushed they are

1yr
Christopher_Matt_5527
Christopher_Matt_5527Lv3

love it great fairy tail story can't wait for more

1yr
Armando_Bronca
Armando_BroncaLv3

[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
Sindria_0639
Sindria_0639Lv4

it's a good story my only problem is it feels that the mc isn't creative with his magic he just follows what bisclow does.--------------------

2yr
Related Stories

Pokemon: I Transmigrated Twice

I am Stephen, assistant to Vegapunk. After transmigrated to the One Piece world and failing in the attempt to take down Imu in collaboration with the Revolutionary Army, I unexpectedly found myself transmigrated again, this time to the Pokémon world. Although my body has become smaller, my mind remains as sharp as ever. My current identity is: The Chief Pokémon Professor of the Pokémon League A mind 500 years ahead of its time Executive Vice-Leader of Team Rocket The second Master-level Trainer after Professor Rowan The benefactor recognized by Rayquaza as its successor Honorary Chairman of the Alola League Supreme Commander of Dark Pokémon! For more info: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/pokemon-i-transmigrated-twice/ Read advanced chapter in my patreon/AbsoluteCode

AbsoluteCode · Anime & Comics
4.7
162 Chs

Warhammer: Starting as a Planetary Governor

In the 41st millennium, darkness rages across the galaxy! The Imperium of Man has lost half of its territories. Millions of planets have fallen victim to the invasion of Chaos! Famine, crime, and heretical cults spread like wildfire… On the planet of Urth, located in the Imperium's dark zone, extreme suffering is taking place. Fortunately, the savior, Eden, has arrived! He awakens to the essence of the Warp and leads his people to prosperity! Starting from a small, broken territory: Farming, building armies, managing internal affairs, unifying the planet, creating Space Marines, forming a fleet, embarking on a grand expedition... When the Lord Regent leads the Imperial fleet to reclaim lost lands, he gazes upon the flourishing star systems and the sky-darkening armada, then looks back at his own ragged ships and is left dumbfounded... Who is the true Imperium? [Raw: 官场职场 > 战锤：从行星总督开始]

Zaelum · Anime & Comics
4.8
231 Chs

Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System

After transmigration or perhaps reincarnation, Mahiro Toma decided to pursue a career as a light novelist. However, everything changed when he read the name of his new school on the notice board. "Wait, Kouh Academy?!" "Isn't this the school from Highschool DxD?" This is the story of a man who finds himself in the fantasy world of Highschool DxD with the unique ability to travel to various anime worlds to grow stronger. Worlds: 1. Highschool DxD 2. Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? (Danmachi) 3. Sword Art Online (SAO) 4. ... --- For advance chapters: patreon.com/heavenlydawn Please Note: I do not own any of the content in this fanfiction. The copyrights belong to their respective creators.

heavenlydawn_ · Anime & Comics
4.5
235 Chs

Fate: I Heard After Death, You Can Ascend to the Throne of Heroes?

Promise transmigrated to the TYPE-MOON world and became one of the students of Waver Velvet at the Clock Tower. But a dream must eventually come to an end. Upon waking from a night's sleep, he recalled his identity as a transmigrator and also discovered his golden finger. A Heroic Spirit Class Card. It can take Promise to different eras, and by leaving behind corresponding legends, he can ultimately ascend to the Throne of Heroes! He thus travelled to ancient Greek mythology and Norse mythology. Promise: "I heard after death, you can ascend to the Throne of Heroes. What are you waiting for, come on, kill me!" (PS: This book is not a traditional simulator story; its content mainly revolves around the Age of Gods, hence the Age of Gods is a long narrative! I didn't use TYPE-MOON in the title as it was already too large) __________ Yup, this is a translation, coz why not? The credit goes to the original author, "It's Just Fate /Fate is just a book." Chinese name: 缘分而已 著 / 游戏竞技 And so, if the original author is reading this and wants me to remove it, then please leave a review below. Link: https://trxs.cc/tongren/8889.html Original: https://www.hbooker.com/chapter-list/100389372?arr_reverse=1 https://wap.ciweimao.com/book/100389372 ......... For advance chapters join my Patreon .. patreon.com/abhi28

Abhii_28 · Anime & Comics
4.7
300 Chs
Login