Review Detail of VirginOlives in Yandere: How A Luckless Man From Earth Got His Harem

I was about to accuse you for stealing the story but I did some research and saw your announcement good thing. Anyways I like the characters as they seem to have more depth than most stories but I think that's just a biproduct when someone makes a yandere story. Sometimes there is some grammatical errors but they are lenial and ignorable so it's fine. The world hasn't started yet but guessing form the pace of the story. It's gonna be world focused with character relations and progress. The main character is relatable and pretty naive and a pushover but I think it's just because he's scared and doesn't have any means to protect himself yet, some might say he's a beta and he sometimes is but this part is coming from the previous story I talked about earlier and it is pretty justified. Overall a great story just fix your upload schedule and it's good.