This fic has many plot holes, unnecessary drama and a grammar that needs am massive improvement if possible, but will give you 5 starts for concept of your plot even though not unique but it is rare and quite exited to read more chapters ๐
Dark_Dragon_V0ID
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LIKEromeotango148:It also claims to be AU yet so far has done virtually nothing different from canon
I would agree if it didnt have all the warning signs of the typical โi trusted the Gremories and they betrayed meโ plot unfolding. Really would be nice if it werent unfolding like dozens of other dxd fanfics on this app have
Krishnbarad:yeah I noticed it too, but it's too early to judge.
๐๐๐๐๐ That's true, I agree with this one...and I also got the feeling that in future Mc will add female sirzechs in his harem, this is kind of following a more typical plot...nothing new in here but i won't complain as I still like UBW
romeotango148:I would agree if it didnt have all the warning signs of the typical โi trusted the Gremories and they betrayed meโ plot unfolding. Really would be nice if it werent unfolding like dozens of other dxd fanfics on this app have
Krishnbarad:๐๐๐๐๐ That's true, I agree with this one...and I also got the feeling that in future Mc will add female sirzechs in his harem, this is kind of following a more typical plot...nothing new in here but i won't complain as I still like UBW
romeotango148:Youโre better than me. Iโm ditching this cliche pity party story
You too, not enough fics with UBW but those stupid naruto bloodlines/powers are seemingly in half of the multiverse or isekai ones
Krishnbarad:good luck to you for finding something new and exotic in this app...๐
Dark_Dragon_V0ID:I like betrayal plots and in the future I will rewrite the novel with more details and changes (probably improvimprove grammar and writing, learn more about dxd and fate and properly write a fanfic)
I use to think the same but when I started reading original novels in this website I started to realize how lackluster Fanfics are. I mean don't get me wrong fanfics quality has somewhat improved in recent years in this website as I remember back then where the authors don't even bothering on correcting obvious misspellings. Those mistakes were so simple that only truly lazy people would not fix it. Although I've seen many authors in Fanfics say they're only trying to improve their writing skills but from what I read from their Fanfics it seems like they've barely improved. It's not the same as OG novels where readers are expecting at least barely misspelled words and a few occasional grammar mistakes.
Krishnbarad:๐๐๐๐๐ That's true, I agree with this one...and I also got the feeling that in future Mc will add female sirzechs in his harem, this is kind of following a more typical plot...nothing new in here but i won't complain as I still like UBW
yeah though sometimes, or very rarely you really can get stuck with excellent novels in here, but they are very rare. if you are really into fanfics with a fantastic writing and grammar ff.net is inarguably the best site, where you can really see some intriguing and intuitive authors with such brilliant plot that, it will blow your mind, but again I webnovel is improving, the quality is definitely improving the changes maybe trial, but they are definitely visible.
Great_Young_Master:I use to think the same but when I started reading original novels in this website I started to realize how lackluster Fanfics are. I mean don't get me wrong fanfics quality has somewhat improved in recent years in this website as I remember back then where the authors don't even bothering on correcting obvious misspellings. Those mistakes were so simple that only truly lazy people would not fix it. Although I've seen many authors in Fanfics say they're only trying to improve their writing skills but from what I read from their Fanfics it seems like they've barely improved. It's not the same as OG novels where readers are expecting at least barely misspelled words and a few occasional grammar mistakes.