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RandomDudeTbh
RandomDudeTbhLv33yr
2021-11-16 07:19

Outstanding, Steel waste comes to mind when I read this. Make sure you don't stop working on this; based on the progress of your other novels, I fear it will be dropped soon; but, prove me wrong and finish this work of art.

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KindyStone
KindyStoneLv2

If this was my novel and I read “you will probably drop soon” is not motivat ing

KindyStone
KindyStoneLv2

It was true but still

RandomDudeTbh
RandomDudeTbhLv3

Yes, I am correct. Unless he resumes, which I sincerely hope will happen soon.

KindyStone:If this was my novel and I read “you will probably drop soon” is not motivat ing
Feveion
FeveionLv13

yknow Its weird, they had a bunch of works goin and they all dropped at once. I really hope they did not get into an accident..

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Cesar117
Cesar117Lv2

Autor, si lees este mensaje déjame decirte que me está gustando mucho esta historia. Además, como veo que si posiblemente incluirlas peros de tipo fantasia o sobrenatural (como el que hace explotar a los enemigos en un lío sangriento), déjame sugerirte uno de los clásicos y uno que quizás podrías incluir para motivar al personaje o como carta de trucos para situaciones desesperadas. Peros (tu decides los requisitos); El forastero misterioso (1/3) nivel: te permite obtener la ayuda (dependiendo de tu estadística suerte y multiplicada por tu nivel de habilidad) del forastero misterioso, un extraño vestido con un atuendo de antes de la guerra y una mortal Magnum .44 que te ayudará en el combate disparando y atrayendo el fuego de los enemigos. Nota; el forastero es intangible e invencible así que no puedes ocultarte detrás de él como si fuera un escudo. Además el forastero solo aparecerá por 10 segundos por cada nivel que tengas en su habilidad. Envio aéreo (1/3); Una vez a la semana (el contador es fijo, no importa si se usó o no la habilidad) se puede pedir una entrega de suministros por vía aérea, estos suministros dependerán del nivel de suerte y de la habilidad, e incluirán raciones de emergencia y enlatados de antes de la guerra, agua, medicamentos, armas y munición balística. Además con 2 puntos en la habilidad se incluye una posibilidad de un robot militar de robco 5% señor agallas 1% asaltron 0.5% Centinela. Y al nivel 3 las armas incluyen una pequeña posibilidad de ser de energía y las posibilidades de los robots aumentan al doble y como una pequeña posibilidad puede incluir una variante del robot, en lugar del regular, (ejemplo asaltaron con camuflaje óptico, etc). Lucky hour (1/1) Una vez a la semana (el contador se reinicia al usarlo) puedes aumentar tu suerte en 5 puntos (hasta un total de 10) durante una hora y al finalizar la hora tu suerte se reducirá a la mitad (se quedará como el número entero mayor, ejemplo de 3 pasaría a 2) durante 24 horas.

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