Review Detail of Rya_kishou in X-dfr
Review detail
Tbh I'm getting heavy ORV and Solo leveling vibes from this novel. The writing is nice but some things arent really well described, such as the looks of the characters. So far I could only understand them both having Black hair that is slightly longer? Idk it was hard to comprehend imo. The story is okay but for the first 2 chapters that I read so far I feel like they are too similar to SL ans ORV ,but maybe that is just for the beginning. For the stories development ,I think it is going well, a little fast but once you got the hang of it it's fine. I will write a new Review when I read more and got a deeper impression on everything.
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nickstar777wow
Liked it!
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WARNING SPOILER! DON'T READ UNLESS YOU WILL BE SPOILED!: if you read further, you would see that someone transmigrated into his novel so yeah. Also remember the terrorist group of the Xeno bombing?... In not gonna say anymore.
Rya_kishou:it wasn't the train but the whole "the novel coming to reality and MC is the only one who knows whats happening" part. it's fine thought c: I don't mind it, since im a big Fan of both novels I just hope that it goes into a more unique way from now on. 👉👈🥺
it wasn't the train but the whole "the novel coming to reality and MC is the only one who knows whats happening" part. it's fine thought c: I don't mind it, since im a big Fan of both novels I just hope that it goes into a more unique way from now on. 👉👈🥺
nickstar777wow:Well it was inspired by orv and sl but- ahh was it the train scene? Hahaha. I just just couldn't use a bus or car.. Definitely not an airplane. I don't know, train just seemed to fit my aesthetic for it.