Author, good story. But It can improve. There is no date, places. In which country and city does the story take place? In what year? (I recommend that it be the year 2000, or before the amazon, facebook, and t companies are giants ...) And for all that is sacred, not to make MC a Chinese protagonist (from xianxia / wuanxia story). đ¤đ (chapter 5) SPOILER MC must not be a simple mobster or criminal. Must be a successful businessman and be connected to politics, the training industry, mining, liquor, the media, etc ... MC is a transmigrant and gets Rick's (original - loser) memory of his 2 lives ... original rick gone back in time. So, Thanks for the story.
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