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Tandoris
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Alright, review, so : -Writing Quality 3/5 Writing is ok, not fantastic but not unreadable. -Stability of Updates 5/5 Nothing to say here, update are often Story Development 2/5 Imo, the story doesn't make sense. Like, he got some cool stat with system but he is the only one with stat at the moment so... Great? I mean it's cool to see that he got 35 in dext and 20 in constitution but is that a lot? Can we have like , i don't know, the arrancar/espada stat to have a comparison? Maybe i read too fast but i can't remember any other stat except a the start when the system said that standart humans have 1 in all stat. The story in himself is ok, but a lot of his action doesn't make sense imo. He don't want to endanger his family but stay in the house forever , don't want to alert Aizen/Yhwach but decide to save Ichigo's mom, then go to Hueco Mundo (aka Aizen's turf) , don't want to alert shinigami but kill every hollow he detect , don't want to change the plot yet go kill Grand Fischer who is litteraly Aizen's experimentation and one of the Arrancar prototype with the hogyoku later in the manga.... Do i need to continue? Character Design 3/5 Nothing special, the mc isn't badly written, but nothing exceptionnal , the only other character (that we see talking at this point) are Masaki and his sister (MC's sister) who are kind of the same even if the sister feel at least a bit humain and not just an NPC World Background 4/5 World background is bleach so great but i don't give 5 cuz it's more repetition of what bleach is than new place, etc... In conclusion, a lot of good idea, but a bad execution.

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KasiCair
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Mhm, I read the reviews on this story after reading it and this is the one closest to what I think of it so I will be putting my opinion here. The MC does st*pid sh*t and honestly, if he did not have his system, he would be lost and useless.I don't have a problem with the MC being a 'decent' person but he is just not considering the consequences and risks of his actions. He is practically just your another incompetent MC whose a*s is saved by his system. That said, the story is not badly written. Just the plot and MCs actions are contradictory with his intentions and are also highly questionable the second you actually start to use your brain to think about what the heck he is actually doing and how risky it is for him. The dude described MCs actions well in this review and how they contradict his intentions. It just makes no sense. Also, with the current pacing of the story and the length of the chapters (I got to around ch24 or so), there would have to be like 300 chapters for it to get somewhere. Which does not fill me with confidence. But hey, that's just my opinion.

S3ntinel
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Can you recommend novels ? Because imo this novel is really good

Tandoris
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Wich type of novel are you searching for? Any favorite universe/world?

S3ntinel:Can you recommend novels ? Because imo this novel is really good
S3ntinel
S3ntinelLv15S3ntinel

Tbh I don’t Care if the novel is good xD

Tandoris:Wich type of novel are you searching for? Any favorite universe/world?
Tandoris
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lol alright prepare yourself : On Webnovel: -Born with an Innate Technique in jujutsu kaisen (jjk) -Pokemon: Master of tactics (pokemon) -Dragonborn Saga (skyrim) -King of The Dead (DC) -One Piece: The legend of Johnny Silverhand (OP) -The Tale Of Loki (Marvel) -HP: A Magical Journey (HP) -Winter Comes (Game of Thrones) -The Player? Surviving in Terraria as the only existence (Terraria) -Hunter X Hunter: Grounded (HxH) -Avatar: Awakened Gamer (ATLA) -Stacking The Deck (Yugioh GX) On Fanfictoin.net : -Mason Aves: The Wizard (HP) -Chaos Effect (yu-gi-oh) -Rough Human Touch (Halo) -Mass Effect: Into the Breach (Mass effect) -Inane Ramblings of an Orgrimmar Orc (Wow) -Borne Of Caution (pokemon) -Game of Shadows (Naruto) Kiri Shinobi with Demigod Powers! SI (Naruto + Percy jackson and Olympian) -Blue Flame (MHA) Reincarnated Into the World of Bleach (Bleach) ALL the ff are Si/isekai/reincarnation (more or less the same imo), cuz it's my favorite kind Hope you find something you like, have a nice day :p

S3ntinel:Tbh I don’t Care if the novel is good xD
charreos
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you my friend have an exquisite taste

Tandoris:lol alright prepare yourself : On Webnovel: -Born with an Innate Technique in jujutsu kaisen (jjk) -Pokemon: Master of tactics (pokemon) -Dragonborn Saga (skyrim) -King of The Dead (DC) -One Piece: The legend of Johnny Silverhand (OP) -The Tale Of Loki (Marvel) -HP: A Magical Journey (HP) -Winter Comes (Game of Thrones) -The Player? Surviving in Terraria as the only existence (Terraria) -Hunter X Hunter: Grounded (HxH) -Avatar: Awakened Gamer (ATLA) -Stacking The Deck (Yugioh GX) On Fanfictoin.net : -Mason Aves: The Wizard (HP) -Chaos Effect (yu-gi-oh) -Rough Human Touch (Halo) -Mass Effect: Into the Breach (Mass effect) -Inane Ramblings of an Orgrimmar Orc (Wow) -Borne Of Caution (pokemon) -Game of Shadows (Naruto) Kiri Shinobi with Demigod Powers! SI (Naruto + Percy jackson and Olympian) -Blue Flame (MHA) Reincarnated Into the World of Bleach (Bleach) ALL the ff are Si/isekai/reincarnation (more or less the same imo), cuz it's my favorite kind Hope you find something you like, have a nice day :p
Tandoris
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Haha , thx :D

charreos:you my friend have an exquisite taste
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